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Evaluation of pitch presentation

I presented my pitch to my class who evaluated it. 
Most of the class said that my film title was relevant but doesn't particularly relate to zombies which might be a good thing as it would surprise the audience. 
Majority thought the characters and cast were very interesting and appropriate for the age rating of my film as there is a very famous porn star, Lisa Ann, included which would attract many people of that age group and above.
There was interest created for the audience and the whole plot and characters were very well thought out.
My film has been said to absolutely target the audience and it will attract customers if it doesn't confuse them. The film includes sex, drugs, violence and alcohol which is appropriate for the target audience; the plot as a whole will attract the audience.
The narrative does fit in with the age bracket and genre. All the conventions are in place however, I may lose audience if its too convoluted. Its set in Las Vegas which is a place where a lot of comedies are set in. 
Most of the class thought the film was very different as it is a comedy that involves zombies and death and has a varied cast. However, some thought it was quite similar to Shaun of the dead which is a British film. 
Some people thought I had good ideas for the marketing of the film. I planned to advertise it on Youtube, billboards, magazines, etc only one person thought that there was not much marketing.
Overall, the whole class agreed that they would buy the rights to my film.